Pretty nice game,but needs this things:
Main Menu Screen - Every game has a menu screen.A good thing to add for a main menu would be adding the features "How to play","High Scores","Options",and most importantly "Play".
Lives - Making you lose points when you collide with a iceberg isn't the way to go.A good thing would be that if you collide with a iceberg,you lose.You go to a menu that says the score you got,and the features "Retry" and "Main Menu".
You should get rid of negative scores.
More obstacles and point items - Adding more obstacles would spice up the game,since only icebergs don't make the thing.Also,fishes give you only a point,so adding another creatures that give you more points would be better.
Powerups would be good.
It needs BGM,and sounds for when you collide with a object or when you get a fish.
It also needs better graphics.
I hope this review helps you to improve.
One of the best games in Newgrounds. :D
Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
Awesome game.It has hard levels,many objects,and nice graphics.In my opinion,the storyline of this game is better than the storyline of the official Nintendo-made Mario games.Also,the level editor is good,but i thing the level editor still needs 2 items:Rainbow carpet(And a tool to customize the route it takes)and vertical level transition(For tall levels,like the horizontal level transition works to prevent lag and make better longer levels).
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